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[3395] Corrected a few grammatical miffs

Thomas Markwalder 11 years ago
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@@ -69,8 +69,8 @@
 
 
     <para>
     <para>
       Kea has been initially developed as a part of the BIND 10 framework
       Kea has been initially developed as a part of the BIND 10 framework
-      (<ulink url="http://bind10.isc.org"/>). In early 2014, ISC has
-      made a decision to discontinue active development of BIND 10 and
+      (<ulink url="http://bind10.isc.org"/>). In early 2014, ISC
+      made the decision to discontinue active development of BIND 10 and
       continue development of Kea as standalone DHCP servers. As a result,
       continue development of Kea as standalone DHCP servers. As a result,
       the DNS server implementation is going to be removed from
       the DNS server implementation is going to be removed from
       the Kea source tree over time. In order to remove the dependency on Python 3,
       the Kea source tree over time. In order to remove the dependency on Python 3,
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
         Kea was developed as a collection of applications within
         Kea was developed as a collection of applications within
         BIND 10 framework and it still relies on the remaining parts
         BIND 10 framework and it still relies on the remaining parts
         of this framework. In particular, the servers' configuration
         of this framework. In particular, the servers' configuration
-        and startup are still facilitated by the modules which origin
+        and startup are still facilitated by the modules which originate
         in BIND 10. These modules require at least Python 3.1 to run.
         in BIND 10. These modules require at least Python 3.1 to run.
         They also work with Python 3.2
         They also work with Python 3.2
         (<ulink url="http://www.python.org/"/>)). The dependency
         (<ulink url="http://www.python.org/"/>)). The dependency
@@ -433,8 +433,7 @@ $ <userinput>./configure</userinput></screen>
 
 
       <para>
       <para>
         Some operating systems or software package vendors may
         Some operating systems or software package vendors may
-        provide ready-to-use, pre-built software packages for
-        the Kea.
+        provide ready-to-use, pre-built software packages for Kea.
         Installing a pre-built package means you do not need to
         Installing a pre-built package means you do not need to
         install build-only prerequisites and do not need to
         install build-only prerequisites and do not need to
         <emphasis>make</emphasis> the software.
         <emphasis>make</emphasis> the software.
@@ -798,8 +797,7 @@ as a dependency earlier -->
       It runs the <command>b10-init</command> daemon which
       It runs the <command>b10-init</command> daemon which
       starts up the required processes, and
       starts up the required processes, and
       will also restart some processes that exit unexpectedly.
       will also restart some processes that exit unexpectedly.
-      <command>bind10</command> is the only command needed to start
-      the Kea.
+      <command>bind10</command> is the only command needed to start Kea.
     </para>
     </para>
 
 
     <para>
     <para>
@@ -914,8 +912,8 @@ as a dependency earlier -->
 <!-- TODO -->
 <!-- TODO -->
       <note>
       <note>
         <para>
         <para>
-          In the future releases of Kea, the architecture which origins in
-          BIND 10 project will be replaced by the new mechanisms to start
+          In future releases of Kea, the architecture which originates in
+          the BIND 10 project will be replaced by the new mechanisms to start
           and configure Kea. The new mechanisms will use a file based
           and configure Kea. The new mechanisms will use a file based
           configuration.
           configuration.
         </para>
         </para>