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[1948] Make minor editorial changes

Mukund Sivaraman il y a 13 ans
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@@ -1354,20 +1354,20 @@ This may be a temporary setting until then.
       on the IPv6 (::) and IPv4 (0.0.0.0) wildcard addresses.
       on the IPv6 (::) and IPv4 (0.0.0.0) wildcard addresses.
       <note>
       <note>
         <simpara>
         <simpara>
-          The default configuration is not appropriate for a multi-homed host.
+          The default configuration is currently not appropriate for a multi-homed host.
           In case you have multiple public IP addresses, it is possible the
           In case you have multiple public IP addresses, it is possible the
           query UDP packet comes through one interface and the answer goes out
           query UDP packet comes through one interface and the answer goes out
-          through another. This will probably be dropped by the client, as it
+          through another. The answer will probably be dropped by the client, as it
           has a different source address than the one it sent the query to. The
           has a different source address than the one it sent the query to. The
-          client would fall back on TCP after several attempts, which works
-          well in this situation, but it is clearly not ideal.
+          client would fallback on TCP after several attempts, which works
+          well in this situation, but is clearly not ideal.
         </simpara>
         </simpara>
         <simpara>
         <simpara>
-          There are plans to solve the problem in a way the server will handle
-          it itself. But until it is actually implemented, it is recommended to
+          There are plans to solve the problem such that the server handles
+          it by itself. But until it is actually implemented, it is recommended to
           alter the configuration &mdash; remove the wildcard addresses and list all
           alter the configuration &mdash; remove the wildcard addresses and list all
           addresses explicitly. Then the server will answer on the same
           addresses explicitly. Then the server will answer on the same
-          interface as the request came, preserving the correct address.
+          interface the request came on, preserving the correct address.
         </simpara>
         </simpara>
       </note>
       </note>
               </simpara>
               </simpara>