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[4502] Fixed a couple of nits in the Kea User's Guide per review comments.

Marcin Siodelski 8 years ago
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2 changed files with 16 additions and 16 deletions
  1. 15 15
      doc/guide/install.xml
  2. 1 1
      doc/guide/intro.xml

+ 15 - 15
doc/guide/install.xml

@@ -148,24 +148,24 @@ Debian and Ubuntu:
 
 
         <listitem>
         <listitem>
         <para>
         <para>
-          MySQL client development libraries, when using --with-dhcp-mysql
-          configuration flag to build the Kea MySQL database backend.
-          In this case an instance of the MySQL server running
-          locally or on some other machine, reachable over the network
-          from the machine running Kea, is required. Though, running
-          unit tests requires that the MySQL server is local.
+          The MySQL client and the client development libraries, when using
+          the --with-dhcp-mysql configuration flag to build the Kea MySQL
+          database backend. In this case an instance of the MySQL server
+          running locally or on some other machine, reachable over the
+          network from the machine running Kea, is required. Note that
+          running the unit tests requires a local MySQL server.
         </para>
         </para>
         </listitem>
         </listitem>
 
 
         <listitem>
         <listitem>
         <para>
         <para>
-          PostgreSQL client development libraries, when using
-          --with-dhcp-pgsql configuration flag to build the Kea PostgreSQL
-          database backend. In this case an instance of the PostgreSQL
-          server running locally or on some other machine, reachable over
-          the network from the machine running Kea, is required. Though,
-          running unit tests requires that the PostgreSQL server is
-          local.
+          The PostgreSQL client and the client development libraries, when
+          using the --with-dhcp-pgsql configuration flag to build the Kea
+          PostgreSQL database backend. In this case an instance of the
+          PostgreSQL server running locally or on some other machine,
+          reachable over the network from the machine running Kea, is
+          required. Note that running the unit tests requires a local
+          PostgreSQL server.
         </para>
         </para>
         </listitem>
         </listitem>
 
 
@@ -178,8 +178,8 @@ Debian and Ubuntu:
         <listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>
           <para>
             Documentation generating tools: elinks, docbook-xsl, libxslt and Doxygen,
             Documentation generating tools: elinks, docbook-xsl, libxslt and Doxygen,
-            when generating documentation using --enable-generate-docs configuration
-            option.
+            when generating documentation using the --enable-generate-docs
+            configuration  option.
           </para>
           </para>
         </listitem>
         </listitem>
 
 

+ 1 - 1
doc/guide/intro.xml

@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
         version 1.8, 1.9 or 1.10. As an alternative to Botan, Kea can use the
         version 1.8, 1.9 or 1.10. As an alternative to Botan, Kea can use the
         OpenSSL crypto library (<ulink url="http://www.openssl.org/"/>),
         OpenSSL crypto library (<ulink url="http://www.openssl.org/"/>),
         version 1.0.*. Support for later versions of Botan and OpenSSL will
         version 1.0.*. Support for later versions of Botan and OpenSSL will
-        be added with later releases of Kea.
+        be added in future releases of Kea.
             </simpara>
             </simpara>
         </listitem>
         </listitem>