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[master] man page cleanup

update date (new features anyways since the old date)
update copyright years
minor rewording
add some docbook tags (but not all noticable in rendered manpage).
Jeremy C. Reed il y a 13 ans
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1 fichiers modifiés avec 10 ajouts et 9 suppressions
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      src/bin/bindctl/bindctl.xml

+ 10 - 9
src/bin/bindctl/bindctl.xml

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
                "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.2/docbookx.dtd"
 	       [<!ENTITY mdash "&#8212;">]>
 <!--
- - Copyright (C) 2010  Internet Systems Consortium, Inc. ("ISC")
+ - Copyright (C) 2010-2012  Internet Systems Consortium, Inc. ("ISC")
  -
  - Permission to use, copy, modify, and/or distribute this software for any
  - purpose with or without fee is hereby granted, provided that the above
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 <refentry>
 
   <refentryinfo>
-    <date>December 23, 2010</date>
+    <date>June 20, 2012</date>
   </refentryinfo>
 
   <refmeta>
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
       <citerefentry><refentrytitle>b10-cmdctl</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>.
       The
 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>b10-cfgmgr</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>
-      daemon stores the configurations and defines the commands.
+      daemon stores the configurations.
     </para>
 
   </refsect1>
@@ -120,8 +120,8 @@
 	    The directory name in which the user/password CSV file
             is stored (see AUTHENTICATION).
 	    By default this option doesn't have any value,
-	    in which case the ".bind10" directory under the user's
-            home directory will be used.
+	    in which case the "<filename>.bind10</filename>" directory
+            under the user's home directory will be used.
           </para>
          </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -167,8 +167,9 @@
       On the first successful login, it will save the details to
       a comma-separated-value (CSV) file
       which will be used for later uses of <command>bindctl</command>.
-      The file name is <filename>default_user.csv</filename>
-      located under the directory specified by the --csv-file-dir option.
+      The file name is "<filename>default_user.csv</filename>"
+      located under the directory specified by the
+      <option>--csv-file-dir</option> option.
     </para>
 
 <!-- TODO: mention HTTPS? -->
@@ -208,8 +209,8 @@
      <para>
        The <command>quit</command>
        command is used to exit
-       <command>bindctl</command>
-       (and doesn't stop the BIND 10 services).
+       <command>bindctl</command>.
+       (It doesn't stop the BIND 10 services.)
      </para>
 
      <para>